above the sun

07/2012

                                               High above this charade of lies 

                                A battlefield wages that surpasses mindsets

                                               Here the Creator's adoration reaches

                               Past the limbo that captives us

                               To where who we were meant to be resides

                               A place untouched by the atramentous acroamatics 

                               Of many centuries of self generated cycles

                                              Gently nudging, He is trying to awake the willing

                                              Those who haven't forgotten

      

                                              That

        

                                              Angels fly above the sun

Author's Note

Reviews

[Rusty]

You have not only used your brush to paint in my mind this morning you have expanded my vocabulary with exellent and perfect word choice. I like that it is not forced as I often see with unusual words. The fact that those particular choices are the only words that aptly describe your message even more intrigiung and display a depth of mind that is fascinating. Thank You for the read request. Always fullfilling reading your work.

[words of rooted design]

"To where who we were meant to be resides" Lo

[To be scene To be heard..]

wow a lovely write wrritten by a amzing writer you never fail to blow my mind

[Larry Dyson]

like the reference to what is real..aove the daily transfixing grind as it should and does appear..hello is any one there for the real reason and participating in the play?

[Shelley Holt-Lowrey]

Awww! This just happened to soon. Your writing has grown so deeply and so quickly. You have moved right into what is beyond my grasp in this writing. Already I must reach when I read poetry. This one - you've taken it beyond where you have ever been. Ever the artist Josh! .... growing and growing and growing!

[MOON]

Angels fly above the sun what a beautiful image and lovely write.

[Shalini Dinesh]

The flow is so excellent, with fantastic choice of words.

[Opposum]

hey, that's a really nice poem and how did you get a music video there, its pretty cool

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good work..!!!

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Beautiful imagery and very impressive vocab!!! I love this!! Btw, I like the video post too.

[The Analog Kid]

I have never stopped by and read any of your stuff. This is really a thought-provoking piece.