above the sun

07/2012

                                               High above this charade of lies 

                                A battlefield wages that surpasses mindsets

                                               Here the Creator's adoration reaches

                               Past the limbo that captives us

                               To where who we were meant to be resides

                               A place untouched by the atramentous acroamatics 

                               Of many centuries of self generated cycles

                                              Gently nudging, He is trying to awake the willing

                                              Those who haven't forgotten

      

                                              That

        

                                              Angels fly above the sun

Author's Note

Reviews

[Rusty]

You have not only used your brush to paint in my mind this morning you have expanded my vocabulary with exellent and perfect word choice. I like that it is not forced as I often see with unusual words. The fact that those particular choices are the only words that aptly describe your message even more intrigiung and display a depth of mind that is fascinating. Thank You for the read request. Always fullfilling reading your work.

[*** Hey Jude***]

Your vivid imagery, along with the ability to write in the vernacular allows you to reach many.
This mesmerizes, and tickles the senses. Such beauty you share to feast upon my Friend!
Very well done! ~ :-)

[Kristallo]

Delightfully compelling read. I love your smooth command of language and candid delivery, this is very well written and excellently crafted. Your message is an open-hearted challenge for people to shed the coils of mortal suffering and misinformation in favor of ethereal truths gained by closeness in spiritual proximity to the essence of our creator. Very nicely done.

[joshua deathdealer]

Thank you. Your quite in tune with your review. I really appreciate it.

[Ruth]

This is satisfying! You have nurtured new direction of late so I see :)
Brilliant love, reading you always grabs my emotions!
xoxo

[Violetta Alexis]

You have gotten even better since I last visited, Joshua!

[Priscilla Sayers]

NOW, YOU KNOW I LOVE THIS!!!!!
Splendid, beautiful..... It grips me now more than ever. Thank you for such a piece my dear friend!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Stellar work, Josh.

[Pax]

lovely and great: To where who we were meant to be resides

[Dark Poetry]

Sweet, Heavenly and Almighty.

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Amazing poetry...gorgeous to read, indeed :)

[Alpris]

How does your poetry flow so smoothly? It's like sweet caramel cream to the eye and like Shakespeare, jewels in your mouth when you recite it. This piece has a surreal touch to it; though short I feel rather satisfied having just read that. You never disappoint me, Joshua. :) Nice job, indeed!