NO MORE CHOCOLATE

An Excited Stranger
Saw the Girl of his Dreams
And immediately Clouds formed on-high
Forming a very Romantic Piece
Which inspired him to sing a Song
Due to so much Chocolate.



Melting mostly in his mouth, hands already soiled
Overcame his Growing Addiction
Approached the Girl and told his Feelings
And all he got was a SHRIEK! And a SLAP!



The Girl ran away, never to return
Leaving the Excited Stranger, crying and depressed
So he took another Bar from his pocket and chewed on
more,
Saying, "No more Chocolate!"

Reviews

[poetickeys]

This is a very breezy, yet enjoyable read! I liked that you created a story out of a simple situation..

I am also very new to this site and would greatly appreciate any feedback in a review on my first and only piece, thank you and thanks for sharing your talent!