spring love

At 16 years old i fell in love for the first time this is the moment i realised

Laid on our backs, looking at the sky,

Small talk and clouds drift on by.

Laid in the heat of mid July sun,

Gazing at your face knowing, you are the one.

Soft breeze and quiet stillness,

Does life get any better than this?

Birds chirp there nothing songs,

No more past, no more wrongs.

Shrewd squirel scampers up a tree,

Look at us both finaly free.

The sweet scent fills the air,

The fruity shampoo from your hair.

Everything i am and love so much,

I would surrender for just one touch.

I hear your voice so gentle with care,

My most wild dreams can't take me there.

Your laughter like honey to my soul,

I have won your love, accomplished my goal.

I told you everything, all my shame,

You see me as I am without my blame.

Come with me now, be my wife,

You are a gift from God, you complete my life.

Author's Note

Forgive spelling please

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful and hopeful poetry for love.
"Come with me now, be my wife,
You are a gift from God, you complete my life."
I liked the above lines. Some woman can steal our hearts forever. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Farah Husain]

omg this is so beautiful I love every line of it!

[Tamika]

This is beautiful and made me remember the very first time I knew I was in love. I like how well you have captured the mood.

[MuteB912]

This poem is very nice. It has a smooth rhythm and paints a pretty scene. Good job!

[Farah Husain]

This is so beautiful and I love it !

[Joshua Lyndon O'shaughnessy]

Thank you very much