Waist My Time

A Haunting Tail Of A Long Lost Love

Waist My Time

 

If I could only hate you

I mite forget

But you memory

Is a curse to me

And living in my heart

There it comes to haunt

And it wont leave me alone

I guess I'll never find

A happy home

And it's true

You still do

Waist my time

 

It was so long ago

Another place and time

Still to me , I can still see

You still play apon my mind

That time we had together

Was a wonder to my soul

And how I cryed and wonder why

When I had to let you go

And it's true

You still do

Waist my time

 

I know your out there

Living out a life

Playing some body's mother

And some body's loving wife

I would hope some how you miss me

But that's a though I shouldn't think

It only shakes me up and leads me to drink

But it's true

You still do

Waist my time

 

By Joseph M. Shea

 

Author's Note

I really don't think about her all that much and the times I do the drinking usely comes first, LOL. Thank for reading, Joe

Reviews

[Nisreen]

Some people are unkind
there is not much to do but i guess wish them enlightenment
i know too well this feeling

This could make a good song

[maryb]

I really like this one,sometimes our personal struggles in life make us who we are, sometimes for the better , and sometimes not, great job on this one, i definitely felt a connection to this one .

[Joseph M. Shea]

Thank you so much, The words wore writen along time ago. But the moment is still fresh in my mind. You mite say , the one that got away. Witch is another song. I guest I should post it. Thanks again and take care

[RobbedByGreed]

I must say, this is a strangely thought provoking piece.

Your word choice makes me wonder if it's on purpose...

Good job,
Keep up the good work :)


---RbG

[Joseph M. Shea]

Thanks for reviewing the piece, I did spend quit a bit of time writing this. I had music first. So it took on a life of it's own. The girl I'm talking about I knew 20 years ago. But the idea stay with me and yes it's all very much on purpose.
I liked the way it came together and the hook works well. Thanks again, Take care, Joe