The deal

The deal

A Poem by Josh Sponsel

As I meet with the devil at the crossroads
for the ownership of your heart,
I lose my soul at this fateful meeting
so we may never be apart

© 2013 Josh Sponsel


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"Oh devil I trade not my soul instead take my words. For my words to love are but one that is nonnegotiable. They alone are hefty and worthy of knowing that my heart is one that should never be compromised as I have love for the one I know is my own. For this, I do not call this as a surrender but as terms of which I present. After all shouldn't love be found on an open road instead of a crossroad?"

Posted 11 Years Ago


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A powerful little piece, I just hope the person you wish to be with is aware of your high sacrifice and is likewise honoured !

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

CrochetRie

11 Years Ago

LOL The joys of having teenagers!
Tom

11 Years Ago

I know, but sure you wouldn't be without them !
CrochetRie

11 Years Ago

Absolutely not! Their my babies!
OH OH OH!! You amaze me more with this one! Never sell you're soul for love! Love you, Kid!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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