Pictures

Pictures

A Poem by joseph enthusiasm

 A tiny glimpse,

           a quick glance,

 

Into the past,

      just a brief look.

 

A smile,

      a funny look,

               or being caught off guard.

 

No matter what the pose,

         you can always see the same thing.

 

That person, 

     who they were then.

 

Their ever changing personality,

            frozen in one moment of time.

© 2009 joseph enthusiasm


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I really enjoyed it. It was simple, but it was powerful. It was nice and adorable. It was written well I agree with Holly-Marie.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this. Simple but effective. Wonderfully written and thought provoking. Very interesting and so true. Thank you for sharing it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh I do like this. It's great, it seems so simple and at the same time it seems to have some great deep meaning to it. It's as though the piece reaches forward and demands that you try to figure it out. It challenges you to find the puzzle pieces.
Well, that probably made no sense to you, but I suppose that my point was that the piece you wrote was great.
Incredible.
Then again, I'm not much of a poet, so my opinion probably won't count for much. Still, regardless to my lack of poetic prowess, I enjoyed the piece, and I congratulate you for writing one that could hold my attention long enough to write this review.
I think I'll see if I can find another one that interests me like this one.
Great write!

ttfn!

Posted 14 Years Ago


very cute write :P i just love taking pictures and then like 20 years later when im old i can say wow these were some of the most fun times of my life :) thanks for the write best today

Posted 14 Years Ago


=)

Posted 14 Years Ago


mm I like this one a lot. It made me smile. I'm adding it to my reading list :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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joseph enthusiasm
joseph enthusiasm

Quad Cities, IL



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My name is Joseph, and I'm seventeen. i impatiently wait all year for february 26. i get along with everyone, unless you give me a reason not to. I used to write, I wish I still did. I'm also a .. more..

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