Haunting spirit

I'll Haunt you, till your doom's day,
I'll haunt you, till your face is pale,
I'll haunt you, till I suck all of your courage,
and turn you into a tame pet....

You deserve nothing but pain,
i'll make you suffer,
like you did to me!
i'll make you cry in agony, like you did!
You will beg to me to kill you,'
but i won't let it happen..

Killing would end your agony, and i want to see you crying!!
Your teary eyes gives me pleasure.

I wanted nothing but your love,
but you left me when i needed you the most.
I had no one whom i could have found solace.
to put an end to agony i had to kill myself..
I had a painful death,
but you din't care... you din't even came to my funeral...
Now i am back...
I am back for revenge..
I'll haunt you...
I'll haunt you till your doom's day....
There is no getting away from your past...
I am back..
Face your worst..
You are doomed!!!!!!!!!!

Reviews

[Khaaki]

it reflects one of the most common yet subdued human emotion.. hatred great imagination

[victoria]

wow this is really deep, it gave me the chills :) i can really tell u hate the person your writing about with a passion. good job :D

[Alicante lullaby]

gothic,,,dark yet gripping,,,iam getting chills,,,

[Blue tailed kite]

A very nice piece, extremely emotional.

[black.butterfly]

nice.

[Blackcat]

I agree with others this is quite an emotional piece.. great wok!! And don't think much about killing. You are not so big.. Life is about living not killing....

[Abd-afeez]

Very emotional. A poetic expression of your mind. You somewhat sort of scared me in between. Its a good one. Keep it up.

[mystic soul]

seems like you really hate the person you are talking about.....