Secrets ep 1

Dyanna's POV:
Hey I'm Dyanna I'm your typical ordinary girl who has big dreams
of her own who hopes one day comes true.I just moved to New York
with my mom,dad,and four other sisters.I don't get why I have to go
to school if I'm never going to learn anything but my mom is making
me go so I have no choice.I just hope that I find the right guy there
because my parents are forcing me to marry a boy I don't even know.
I want to get marry one day for love not because your parents are making
you,I hope they understand that when I find the right guy.I'm suppose to
meet the guy today at dinner and I'm really really nervous....like really
nervous!!
Roslyn(dyanna's mother):Dyanna come down here or your going to be late for your
first day of school.
Dyanna:*sighs/goes downstairs/sarcastic*I wouldn't want that to happened right.
Roslyn:Honey I know you don't want to go to school but can you at least try to make
new friends today.
Dyanna:*setting the table*yeah like thats ever going to happen.
Ashley(dyanna's older sister):*comes downstairs*Oh come on dyanna don't be so
negative don't you remember how popular you were back in our old school.
Dyanna:*finishes setting the table/grabs her breakfast*Yeah that was in our old school
I don't get why we had to move to this boring place anyways*leaves*
Roslyn:Dyanna come back here please.....
Ashley:don't worry mom she'll get over it soon I have to go gonna be late*grabs her backpack*
Bye mom...
Roslyn:Ok i guess bye have a nice day sweety stay out of trouble.
Ashley:kk bye*leave her house*
-At Horace Mantis Academy-
Dyanna:*walking down the hall looking at her schedule*
Daniel:*kind of running to his locker/bumps into someone as everything falls in the ground*
Dyanna:uh great just what I needed*starts picking them up*
Daniel:sorry stranger-um girl I don't know I should've have been watching where I was going
*helps her pick them up*
Dyanna:its alright,no problem*picks them up to*
Daniel:*reaches for her book*
Dyanna:*reaches for the same book/when suddenly they touch hands/feels sparks/looks up*thinks:
whoa
Daniel:*also feels sparks/looks up*thinks:whoa

Author's Note

Sorry again if it's short and sucky...please comment what you think.I think soon I'm going to write a Jick story have any ideas feel free to tell me thanks!!!!

Reviews

[Amata Luna]

Ahm, the story looks good but the part where Dyanna and Daniel holds their hands accidentally seems pretty predictable. I think you can make it better with the next episodes anyway. I'd love to see how Dyanna would fare now with Daniel on the line. :) Keep it going well and good.

[luv2dream]

it sounds really great I'll have to read the rest.

[Niranjan Menon]

superb..........