Dancing

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Tonight my love as
You watch me dance
The urge to have you
Drives me wild it burns my body
Just the thought of your name my
Breath leaves me
And in silence your look tells a thousand words
Dancing, dancing
May the sun never rise on this night as I'm begging
Of you
The fire inside me is driving me crazy
Its filling me up
And I can't take it anymore
Oh my love
Oh my love come dance
Dance with me
Of this misery and sooth me
Your heart beat accelerates my heart
I want to be with you to dance with you
To have you
Dancing with me
What irony of fate not being able to touch you
embrace you smell your scent
One look from you and I'm in another planet
I want to be with you, to have you
To dance with you to kiss your mouth
Dancing is satisfying
the pain is leaving me

Author's Note

Hope you liked it.

Reviews

[ANTO]

Whats not to like Jo, this is longing as I've rarely read it. Its practically begging except that theres that thread of love right the way through it that says - I may have the desire BUT it is only for him !!
Its like you hung-drew and quartered yourself on the WC village common for all to see in the name of love. Can't get much better than that im my opinion.
Loved it!

[jo]

Thank you very much, for your review very appreciated.
Jo.