Hard pleasing you

Trying so hard to please someone who is always disappointed in you.

I. Could pore out the river I hold in my eyes
Shed the skin that cloth my bones
Rip out the hair that cover my bones
I could grant my heart the serenity to accept
The pain,the fear
Give my soul the wisdom to strive
My life, mine to hate
I try to please you, I try so hard
You throw your hush words to me and they hit me like stones
The wounds they cause me very deep
The scars forever for me to bare
My once precious soul, now lost in between
Me and you
Am I me or am l you
Your mistakes you want to mend in me
I feel from you cold hate, so cold I shiver
When you look into my eyes
When I look into yours I see the depth of your disappointment for me
You never asked, you judged you hanged me up without letting me in
I may laugh with you
Deep inside my heart is slowly melting away
like ice
I'm afraid
Afraid of what I don't know
And again I try to please you

Author's Note

Hope the writing make sense

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Makes plenty of since, I really felt my heart is slowly melting away,
that so sad, many people realize what they have until its gone unfortunately, check
out my writing called together. Thanks for sharing.

[jo]

Thank you Jamestown I appreciate it, and I did read Together its a very beautiful piece of work very funny too.
Jo.