Helpless.

Helpless.

A Poem by jo

My heart is heavy
The burden becomes heavy on my
Shoulders.
Alone I find myself

Fear creeps in crawling,
But it sure takes over my being

My heart is still heavy
As I walk around like a ghost
Has anyone bothered
To ask or land a
Hand !.

© 2014 jo


Author's Note

jo
Hope its better than the last poems, still getting a hang of it . Thank you

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As I walk around like a ghost
That line sounded funny to me.
But otherwise the poem was full of emotions . It feels very bad when there is noone around to help you.
Keep it up.

armin. ..

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on November 13, 2014
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jo
jo

Mozambique



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