long hour of the day

Feeling Lonely

Long hour of the day
Loneliness drowns in
a deep longing
For companionship, the heart yawns for love
a feeling that will shake it and cripple it

A feeling that will tremble it,
The body gets weaker and weaker
Only the one behind the veil of love will resurrect it, bring it back to life
And the long hour of loneliness will be a thing of
Yesterday'.

Author's Note

This is my first time posting a poem I hope its good and also the language use .Thank you

Reviews

[Eleanor]

Again, this one is packed with emotions.
loneliness. Ah, we don't realize how much loneliness can destroy us. We all long to have someone to share our life with. You described both- loneliness and love.
How loneliness seems the worst thing ever.
And how love seems the best cure ever.
Another great try! Thank you :)

[Meant_to_be]

I love your poems especially because you can feel the emotions. Really good job

[Stephanie K.]

I have read all your poems and this one is by far the best. Unlike your others, I can actually feel the emotion through the words which is what poetry is all about. I also agree though that it does not need to be rated mature. Keep writing, practice may not make perfect but it definitely helps!

[Kenaz]

Better writing, but it does not need to be rated mature haha ;D

[R Smith]

Loneliness drowns in
a deep longing

that's such a lovely line, this is a very good poem, the theme of loneliness is a big part of poetry and provides us with much in inspiration well done Jo :)