undecided

" beauty is in the eye of the beholder, i yearn to lye in that eye"

 

Take me to another place

Beyond what I can dream,

There I will fall for you

And your lovers scheme.

Time will be but a myth

And no longer a short regret,

Instead time will last forever

In our lovers debt.

 

The nights they will fall slowly

Draped within your arms,

And dreams they will come softly

Influenced with your charm.

 

Mornings will rise warmly

As the sun streams across your face,

Eyes will meet with sweet hellos

as your smile illuminates grace.

 

Days will be spent in silence

Embracing quiet passion,

Words no longer necessary

With such romantic fashion.

 

 

The faintest of touches

Will no longer be so queer,

But instead hold a stronger hold

Of intimacy’s fear.

 

Words will no longer be

Just casual conversation,

For underneath will lye a relay

Of our hearts true relations.

 

So till this moment comes for us

To sail into the sky with glee,

I’ll hold you in my heart

As I hope you will hold me.

 

 

 

 

                        J.B<3

Author's Note

this is the first draft. please feel free to point out anything (:

Reviews

[Jamie White]

This was well written, good job (:

[Avoiry]

This is very cute and i am glad that someone isn't so cynical when it comes to the idea of love. This is worded beautifully and i really don't see anything wrong with it. Flows well, Worded well.