Lucas loses his grandmother to double pneumonia. Lucas, already having psychic abilities, sees a memory of his mother giving him to his grandmother as an infant, when he takes her hand in his grasp for the last time. His grandmother immediately knows that he saw this and quickly advises for him to stay away from his mother. He soon finds out more than he wants to know... about everything in the world; there are greater forces at work; a war that has been raging on for millenniums is coming to an end. Lucas is the key to bringing an end to this war, but doesn't know which side he belongs.
I'd just like to let everyone know that "In Progress....." is NOT the actual title of my book. I simply have not thought of a title yet therefore the current title is "In Progress...."
I hope that made sense... but anyways please review and let me know what you think!!
My Review
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The problem with most summaries is they are written AFTER the Book and often by a paid Reviewer.
You have a "vision" of your intent. What is above doesn't overly define, identify, or depict very much of your vision for others to think about.
As a writer are you creating OR using the world? Is your work going to be epic, broad, localized, or somewhat limited to maybe even very limited - in its scale and scope? Is it to be fantasy, fiction, adventure, historical period, future, scifi, gothic, horror, romance, what? Have you developed an outline, defined and identified a cast of main characters, established an events timeline... written down your intended plot - including giving yourself clues of how to get to the end - from your chosen beginning? Many, many questions remain to be asked and if possible - answered. It isn't easy being an author - but we never asked it to be now did we?
Take care,
Chris
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
I understand that most summaries are written after the book. I do indeed have everything you've ment.. read moreI understand that most summaries are written after the book. I do indeed have everything you've mentioned above: my planning, genre, characters and everything. I'm over half way done with this book now and It is only the beginning of the story. I've planned this story to be a trilogy and I've even got editors editing my writing chapter by chapter as i complete it.
Alright lol. I've got it hand written, i just need to get it typed. (everything i have written for t.. read moreAlright lol. I've got it hand written, i just need to get it typed. (everything i have written for this book so far has all been hand written)
12 Years Ago
Sounds good, I hope it gets tons of reads.
12 Years Ago
You and me both, lol I've put a lot of work into this.
The problem with most summaries is they are written AFTER the Book and often by a paid Reviewer.
You have a "vision" of your intent. What is above doesn't overly define, identify, or depict very much of your vision for others to think about.
As a writer are you creating OR using the world? Is your work going to be epic, broad, localized, or somewhat limited to maybe even very limited - in its scale and scope? Is it to be fantasy, fiction, adventure, historical period, future, scifi, gothic, horror, romance, what? Have you developed an outline, defined and identified a cast of main characters, established an events timeline... written down your intended plot - including giving yourself clues of how to get to the end - from your chosen beginning? Many, many questions remain to be asked and if possible - answered. It isn't easy being an author - but we never asked it to be now did we?
Take care,
Chris
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
I understand that most summaries are written after the book. I do indeed have everything you've ment.. read moreI understand that most summaries are written after the book. I do indeed have everything you've mentioned above: my planning, genre, characters and everything. I'm over half way done with this book now and It is only the beginning of the story. I've planned this story to be a trilogy and I've even got editors editing my writing chapter by chapter as i complete it.
You have mentioned enough keywords for me to stay with this,but in same time I don't know should I as I could be one of your fans or biggest pain depending on how good you portray what these keywords mean. Waiting for prolog...
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Thanks. I believe you should be a fan but that's my own personal opinion but I think I'm going to po.. read moreThanks. I believe you should be a fan but that's my own personal opinion but I think I'm going to post the prologue tomorrow or Friday so just keep watching for it.
My name is Jon. I absolutely LOVE writing and reading. They are my true loves of life. I hope to someday be a well know author and I wanna be an actor on tv too :)
I have very high goals set for my.. more..