I Love You

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all i wanted in this world

were three simple words

but those three, i've never heard

is it really that hard to say?

i see you every day

i've done everthing that you asked

and i always help you in geometry class

i compliment everthing you wear

and always say "i love your hair"

but u dont seem to care

when i say something its like you dont listen

to make you love me is my mission

but i'm failing despertly

i just want you next to me

but thats a spot it seems you dont wanna be

theres no other girl like you

and i just dont know what to do

u drive me to the point of desperation

when you scream "what the f**k do you want?"

all i wanted were three words

but those three, i've never heard

Reviews

[turtlegirlluver]

After the first two stanzas I was hooked and can relate to a lot of your poem. I clearly felt what you were going through, and how much you wanted to hear those three words. This is very strong and well written! Good job!