Echo

Echo

A Poem by names jon but i prefer jon
"

lonely man cant doesnt hear the girl he calls

"

he calls u

u dont answer

he just hears the soft thud of his heart

and the echo of his voice

it bounces off the cave walls

and comes back 2 him

hes all alone

in a cave

© 2008 names jon but i prefer jon


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its brilliant
a little bit more work
but bro its nice
its what your heart shows|!!!!|

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on July 21, 2008

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names jon but i prefer jon
names jon but i prefer jon

Charlotte, NC



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