Her

i wrote this in 7th grade

I dream a dream, 

I dream of gods.

 Of ancient brooks, 

and trails yet trod. 

I dream of all 

these wondrous things.

 But most oft

she is in my dreams.

Reviews

[Sorry Infamous]

wow, i find that hard to believe you wrote that when you were so young. I read my poetry from then and it is not half of half as good as that. I guess some people are just prolific. Very very interesting.

[..R.I.P..]

I liked it, it's very good for being written in the 7th grade. Very nice write.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. this one was really good if you wrote it in grade 7.. I like the feel of it.. possibly a writing on a young crush ... those ones are so vivid... I love reading romance, fantasy and some dark poetry.. this one is in between fantasy and romance.. a little of each .. very nice writing! =)

[Gandré]

The talent was already visible! sweet, sweet your world...