Donut Whole

Just a whimsy inspired by: "Who stole the donut?" A Poem by yma~catherine http://www.writerscafe.org/writers/haikuhorse/

            Donut Whole

             Jonathan Bryant Dean

Always remember when on a diet,
When sneaking donuts do it quiet
Eat the donut hole,
not the donut whole
Then if you're caught just deny it!

Author's Note

Feel free to review in limerick form.

Reviews

[Nicole Marie]

HaHA!! Fun!

[Pamela A. Lamppa]

I had to chuckle with this one. Excellent. Well done with wit and brevity. ~Pamela

[melanie j bean]

sweet as pie!

[rachelgeorgina]

What a laugh!

[Spoken]

lol funny and cute

tell them
"eat half of a whole
it's the new diet craze
just ask the celebrities"
and before ya know it
the world will be infested
with half eaten pasteries
and oversized bellies
and you'll be the new skinny!

[Niall H]

Haha!
Quite enjoyable and funny, well done.

[yma~catherine]

haha!!
:)

sugar of powder upon my lips
forever denying the effect on my hips
round and plump
eat the lump
um...
of the hot cocoa take some sips?

no?