Donut Whole

Just a whimsy inspired by: "Who stole the donut?" A Poem by yma~catherine http://www.writerscafe.org/writers/haikuhorse/

            Donut Whole

             Jonathan Bryant Dean

Always remember when on a diet,
When sneaking donuts do it quiet
Eat the donut hole,
not the donut whole
Then if you're caught just deny it!

Author's Note

Feel free to review in limerick form.

Reviews

[L.M.Warde]

You successfully made me laugh out loud, thank you.

[Khalab Darnell]

awesome hahahaha

[Sasha]

I do love people with sense of humor. Your poem is funny and true.

[oxo]

hahaha. this is funny. nice job!

[vinny ciambriello]

Keep writing those personal stories. It may be your strong suit.

[vinny ciambriello]

'Tis only five lines it is true
And all of them read, none blue
But the hole won't fill in
Isn't much of a sin
And just far too little to chew

[GBU POETRY ONLY]

Donut holes, I've had a few myself ...
That was Sweet!!!!!

Donut & Hole went to market
Smart & Final was their target
On their way they picked up Mojo
who dipped himself into Hole's hot cocoa
Donut cried cus Hole fell in
Mojo laughed cus it was time to begin
HIS DIET...

[Shellie]

[Rufio The Jedi]

i like how this poem feels so natural, nothing seems forced. just a simple, good poem about restraining from donuts.

[Jessie B]

haha, that made me hungry. good job