The Night is Upon Us

There's a Full Moon tonight, be careful

I feel it rising over the cliff,

The hair on my neck standing stiff.

The cycle once again complete,

The Full Moon I anxiously greet.

Now empowered I'm on the prowl,

Deep from my chest you hear my growl.

Bright strong eyes meet your gaze,

You're lost and mine now stuck in my maze.

Run and scream but it will do you no good,

you turn around but only grass is where I once stood.

Confused and scared you search for me,

Then my breath you feel from up in the tree.

You've no where to go and no where to hide,

For me it's been fun, an exhilarating ride,

But the time has come for the hunt to end,

This is the night I will ascend.

Reviews

[Sethnicity]

Very nice.... that guy is quite the predator!
only 1 critique:
"this is the night I will descend".. but that's just where I would have gone with it...
Other wise amazing write it deserves it's place at the top of your list.

Favorite line:
"Now empowered I'm on the prowl,
Deep from my chest you hear my growl.
Bright strong eyes meet your gaze,
You're lost and mine now stuck in my maze."

I love the thrill of the HUNT! :)

[smurfett]

Wow!! I am very excited with this one....must be the animal in me...hehe

[That_Guy]

You're not the only one ;)

[That_Girl]

Dark and carnal... I like! Short but you get the point across...

You made it sexy which, after Twilight, is hard to do lol

[That_Guy]

Team Jacob! ;) hahahaha

[That_Girl]

lol most definitely... At least if you cut off his face he has a nice body. XD

[That_Guy]

hahaha

[Ella]

An amazing read. Very catchy. Very nice. This piece of work is amazing.

[That_Guy]

thank you, I had some fun with this one

[Speak in Silence]

wow, its so amazing, good luck :)

[That_Guy]

Thank you, I appreciate it

[Speak in Silence]

You're welcome :)

[Elizabeth]

This one is fun, too :) Creepy and sick. Two of my favorite elements in a poem. I could feel "it" watching me. If I were you, and this is just a suggestion- I would remove the punctuation all-together. I do that in poetry so that the thoughts aren't broken, visually. But I liked this- and I don't like anything :)

[That_Guy]

Who doesn't appreciate a little creepy and some sick every now and again. Maybe "it" is watching... I actually like that suggestion I'll give it a try. Well I'm glad you like it

[Elizabeth]

:)

[Lilith]

Very nice.

[That_Guy]

why thank you ;)

[Dark Angel]

very nice, loved how i could see everything and feel the suspense!! i loved it, keep it up!!

[That_Guy]

Mission accomplished, Thank you ;)

[Kohleen]

Love it! so suspencful and keeps the reader reading. And fantastic imagery, you indeed did a great job :) keep on writing mr.lover/fighter

[That_Guy]

haha Thank you. I think I'm going to start writing again. lol ;)

[Kohleen]

you should! you're really good at it. Just sayin'

[That_Guy]

I appreciate it

[Cristiana Joy]

You gave me shivers! Excellent piece.