Cliché

Cliché

A Poem by That_Guy
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Full of Cliché yet still so true

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Roses are red and violets blue, 
Full of Clichés I'm writing to you.
There may be plenty of other fish in the sea,
But I'd rather you stay and be with me.

All is fair in love and war,
Well I choose to fight so you see what's in store.
If love is blind why is it so easy for me to see,
That we belong together, just you and me.

I'm unlucky in cards but lucky in love,
Because I have you, sent from Heaven above.
They say opposites attract and if that's true,
How could I be worthy of you.

You're picture perfect, the stuff dreams are made of,
While I have a face only a mother could love.
But every dog has it's day,
And us together is anything but Cliché.

© 2012 That_Guy


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Haha it is very cliche but adorable as well. Cute! I like it! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


That_Guy

12 Years Ago

i like it when the end up cute ;) haha
That_Girl

12 Years Ago

lol most guys do! Then again... some crash and burn so... ;) jk. This was nice.
That_Guy

12 Years Ago

haha true. ;)
this is really cute....such a witty guy..;)hahah...
"You're picture perfect, the stuff dreams are made of,
While I have a face only a mother could love."...i love this lines...hahahah..lol's

Posted 12 Years Ago


That_Guy

12 Years Ago

haha thank you. I swear my face is not as bad as i say it is lol (it's worse... jk)
natzky

12 Years Ago

hahah....you make me laugh again..lol's..don't be defensive...heheh
That_Guy

12 Years Ago

haha ;)
i love this. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Invisable_Girl

12 Years Ago

ur welcome. this has to be my favorite so far:)
That_Guy

12 Years Ago

cool, I had fun with this one
Invisable_Girl

12 Years Ago

:)
It takes takes talent to break apart cliche' and then string them back together. This is so clever! I was smiling from the first line and then the last line was so right on. Definitely going in the favorites.

Posted 12 Years Ago


That_Guy

12 Years Ago

awesome, I'm glad you liked it :)
Naww!! this was just plain cute and your right this is just full of the classic cliche stuff you hear in cheesy movies but put together with your talent it is " is anything but Cliché". Another great piece.


Posted 12 Years Ago


That_Guy

12 Years Ago

Why thank you Otsana ;)
Love is sort of a cliched element in this world, ain't it?

Posted 12 Years Ago


IWitty, funny & cleverly penned.... :o)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is absolutely adorable! Whoever this girl is has the lucky guy.
Cliché is definitely not a word to describe this poem, if anything, it's no where near that.
You may use the various clichés we hear in every day life, but you interpret them in such a way in this poem; it was worth the read.
May you have good luck with this girl!

A very bright and cheerful read; it actually cheered me up.

-Marie Riorden-

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow this is definantly different. It is interesting but it is also great. Nice work

Posted 12 Years Ago


ah...interesting. nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 2, 2012
Last Updated on August 6, 2012
Tags: cliche, love, poem, roses, red, fish, war, blind, together, faith, beauty, attract, picture, perfect, dog, day, anything

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That_Guy
That_Guy

Anza, CA



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First off I'm 23 years old. I'm a lover and a fighter. I've competed in various martial arts and I consider myself a rather opposing figure. On the outside you see tattoos, muscles and scars but what .. more..

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