Cliché

Full of Cliché yet still so true

Roses are red and violets blue, 

Full of Clichés I'm writing to you.

There may be plenty of other fish in the sea,

But I'd rather you stay and be with me.

All is fair in love and war,

Well I choose to fight so you see what's in store.

If love is blind why is it so easy for me to see,

That we belong together, just you and me.

I'm unlucky in cards but lucky in love,

Because I have you, sent from Heaven above.

They say opposites attract and if that's true,

How could I be worthy of you.

You're picture perfect, the stuff dreams are made of,

While I have a face only a mother could love.

But every dog has it's day,

And us together is anything but Cliché.

Reviews

[Jo March]

Such a lovely rhythm, the beat moves you through it so nicely, along with the regular rhyme. I love the innocence of it, and the self-deprecation is something that I think everyone can relate to 'a face only a mother can love'
Very lovely poem

[JiDonnelly]

Total cuteness:p!!

-JiDonnelly'

[That_Guy]

I'm thinking about making that my nickname

[JiDonnelly]

Making what your nickname?

[That_Guy]

Total Cuteness haha

[JiDonnelly]

proud!!

-Ji'

[april-in-november]

Adorable. Made me smile. :-)

[That_Guy]

Mission accomplished! thank you haha

[CLUTZ]

Very cute, it made me feel all mushy inside. I don't know much about love poems, outside of a few 18th century poets, but this was nice.

[That_Guy]

Mission accomplished haha thank you

[CLUTZ]

you're welcome

[ForeverNever]

"Roses are red and violets blue,
Full of Clichés I'm writing to you."
Made me smile thinking of how many poems I've wrote with that beginning :)
But you're very talented, it all flows so well, written very smoothly.
I love finding legit, talented writers:)

P.S. Found you through: That_Girl..y'all prove that there's still hope for good literature ;)

[That_Guy]

Gotta love the Classics ;) Thank you very much I"ll have to check out some of your work.

read moreGotta love the Classics ;) Thank you very much I"ll have to check out some of your work.

haha she is a very talented writer.

[ForeverNever]

I'd appreciate it:)
And you both are, I've found some new mentors *mental happy dance* ;)

[That_Girl]

Oh my god... you are just the sweetest! ^_^

And thanks for jumping on her bandwagon Jon. ;)

[That_Guy]

I know right! :)

hahahah that sounds like me ;)

[ForeverNever]

I sweet, I'm also very honest ^.^

[That_Guy]

I admire honesty, Makes the reviews mean that much more ;)

[That_Girl]

lmfao double meaning much?

[melissa]

light and cute:)

[That_Guy]

thank you :)

[melissa]

welcome

[Daliah Valley]

Aw. That's cute. :) It reminds me of fluffy clouds for some reason.

[That_Guy]

haha I hope that's a good thing

[That_Guy]

haha I hope that's a good thing

[Priscilla Sayers]

Fabulous! Light, loving, sweet romanced in perfect verses!

[That_Guy]

thank you, I had fun with this one

[Priscilla Sayers]

:)

[Allyson Wolfe]

This is deeper than a cliche. It's a great write! Although it starts with the beginning of a cheesy, and usually cliche poem, it turns into something deeper than that. I like it a lot!

[That_Guy]

I'm so glad you think so.
Thanks Allyson ;)

[tmpebbles]

I'm unlucky in cards...I like it. I'll make a toast. Here's to cliches lol

[That_Guy]

haha cheers ;)