Enough is Enough

Don't take me for granted

All the things I do for you,

The endeavors that I walk you through,

You take me for granted, my presence, body, and soul,

Well the pain has finally taken it's toll.

I give and I give while you take and take,

But it means more to me and for that I ache.

Simple actions often mean the most,

Not the grander ones you like to boast.

Show me some effort and let me know you try,

Rather than leaving me guessing or making me cry.

The time has come for me to draw the line,

Letting this continue would be a heinous crime.

I'll give the ultimatum,

A choice you must make,

Your future with me is now at stake.

I'm not asking you to change but to adapt and grow with me,

For without that promise from you, we cannot be.

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

Ouch. That's one delicate situation

[That_Guy]

the roller coaster of life heh

[Broken Wings]

I really enjoyed reading this. It had a nice flow to it.

[That_Guy]

thank you I'm glad. All the hardships I face I use to make me stronger. I welcome obstacles.

[Baby Ricochet]

Good job. Nice rhyming. My advice. Rebound p***y. Can I say that on this site? To goddamn late now.

[That_Guy]

haha I was digging up emotions for a few years back. I've got that under control now ;)

[That_Girl]

Relationships can never be one sided and the moment when you realize you are the only one continually giving is also the moment you realize it just can't work. It's emotionally draining and you expressed that feeling well. Nicely done my dear.

[That_Guy]

Thank you. One of the worst feelings I've had is still loving someone who I felt stopped loving me

[That_Girl]

I know it. :/ I'm sorry hun

[That_Guy]

I can't say I'm fully recovered but I can say that I'm ok. thanks though ;)

[That_Girl]

Eh those things take time. :)

[That_Guy]

I've got plenty of time

[That_Girl]

In the pain there is healing. It will work itself out eventually. :)

[That_Guy]

well that's reassuring ;)

[That_Girl]

Annnd he makes the seriousish conversation not so serious. :p

[That_Guy]

it's my defense mechanism so you don't hurt me

[That_Girl]

So that I won't hurt you? ME?!

[That_Guy]

I may look tough but I'm sensitive remember heh

[That_Girl]

Oh I remember. ;)

[Ian H Morrison]

very nicely written the stanzas flow well you have used the end rhyme to your benefit exceptionally well the whole poem just flows fantastically

[That_Guy]

Thanks Mate I appreciate it

[Ian H Morrison]

nope praise is due it is all down to yourself you wrote it and did a bloody good job of it to

[That_Guy]

Just the way I like it. Cheers.

[Ian H Morrison]

why did you delete your comment

[That_Guy]

Grammatical error, I corrected it.

[Ian H Morrison]

ok lol gosh do not check my grammer then it is bloody awful lol

[That_Guy]

I try only to be tough on myself, as far as grammar goes, so you should be fine ;)

[Kohleen]

Yet again another great one. I have felt this way too many times and I know you have writen this perfectly :) keep on writing chico!

[That_Guy]

Thank you, this one definitely had some emotion behind it

[Kohleen]

I could tell ;) and it's somehow easier to write when emotional

[That_Guy]

Showtimes the hard part is stopping

[Kohleen]

yeah i know how hard it is to stop. It's practically addicting

[SlipKnoT]

beautifully written