Music Is My Life

Music is my more kind side. Soothes the savage beast

Plucking a string or strumming a chord,

This is what you'll hear when I am bored.

Music itself has become my life,

Singing my job, and performing my wife.

Finding the right note can be easy at times,

Unlike choosing the right words while making it rhyme.

Feel the rhythm and don't force the tune,

Inspiration will come by the light of the moon.

What triggers my mind to want to create?

Was I born this way, is this my fate?

A noise I hear or a sight I see,

The world itself inspires me.

There is so much of me in my song

No missing key, no lyric wrong.

My masterpiece of melody,

Finally fulfilling my musical destiny.

Reviews

[Lilith]

Nicely written, I find myself lost in the music itself.

[That_Guy]

Don't you just Love when that happens

[Lilith]

Yes, I do. It's the only time that I don't really have to be me, I can just close myself off to the world and listen.

[That_Guy]

Music proves to be a great escape for me as well

[Lilith]

One of the greatest in my opinion. :)

[That_Guy]

couldn't agree more

[Kohleen]

great, again, and really captures the feelings of music. I often feel similure when I'm playing around with my guitar, coming up with random lyrics and random notes. you did a fantastic job :)

[That_Guy]

I love expressing myself through music

[Heather]

I loved the line, singing my job and performing my wife. So creative and perfect, the marriage of someone who is so touched by music that it becomes part of who they are, it is love. Great work here, I think you worded how those of us who have a passion for music feel. I enjoyed this.

[That_Guy]

I'm so glad you get it. Thank you

[Kaylor Mason]

This is awesome! Martial arts and music do work hand in hand, you know. Same principles, same flow, same feeling.

[mariah]

good job! this poem has great rythem and is well written. it made me think of how i feel when listen to music and how it can take you away from where ever you are and bring you somewhere completly different. good write :D

- mariah :)

[ThomasHinyard]

I love the rhymes that are written in this poem. I also love the consistent rhythms and patterns that have been created. I took this as your own declaration of "music as your life", and thats amazing. I think that you could revise this more. I think there can more expanded between all four of those stanzas, like a big confrontation. Look through this and you'll probably see. :)

[deadlysilence]

outstanding write I love the way it rhymes and how it flows(:
wonderful job

[AtticusBlack]

Music as your job and wife, brilliant :) completely how I feel about it. The world is such an inspirational place and obviously has the right effect on you!

[Marie]

I love music, and I like it in this poem. It says a lot about a musician.

[Angelic Surrender]

I love this one :)