True Ecstasy

True Ecstasy

A Poem by That_Guy
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Inspired by my Muse

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You’ve never truly known strength,
Until the day I held you tight.
No safe haven as warm or shielding,
As when you’re wrapped securely in my arms.

Every detail, every inch of your fair skin,
Explored by my rough yet gentle hands.
Our bodies entwined and minds connected
New smells, new tastes, true ecstasy.

Our paths collide on a journey with the same destination,
Our hearts will lead as our bodies eagerly follow.
My gaze never breaks from yours as we reach the pinnacle,
Pulse quickens, sweat glistens, hushed screams echo.

I’ve never truly seen beauty,
Until the day I woke next to you.
Never so at peace or complete,
As when you’re wrapped securely in my arms.

© 2012 That_Guy


Author's Note

That_Guy
Something a bit more mature but still my sappy self, hopeless romantic heh

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Beautiful, in the purest sense. Your use of the 'tough guy' approach to your tone in your works only serves to touch the reader emotionally, rahter than causing them to cringe. Top marks, as always.

Posted 12 Years Ago


That_Guy

12 Years Ago

Thank you, I like my poems to reflect my persona and I'm glad someone is getting that
D E L I C I O U S

Posted 12 Years Ago


That_Guy

12 Years Ago

why thank you ;)
awwwwwwww so cute, was that about a girl???:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


That_Guy

12 Years Ago

Yup ;)
Victoria Elizabeth

12 Years Ago

ohhhhh you cassnova!!!!! did she get to read it!!!!!!
I'm not exactly a sappy romance kind of girl, but this slipped in as more sweet than anything else. I really liked it, you clearly have a lot of talent.

Posted 12 Years Ago


That_Guy

12 Years Ago

I'm glad you think so, thanks
I can't really review this. Love is for . . . teenagers. Teenagers and . . . well, just other people . . .

Posted 12 Years Ago


That_Guy

12 Years Ago

meh I'm young at heart
very sensual and sweet, wonderful write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


That_Guy

12 Years Ago

that's me in a nutshell heh jk. Thank you
Ghost of Jupiter

12 Years Ago

heheh ;)
Very intimate! Your wording is wonderful and the flow is excellent.
"Our paths collide on a journey with the same destination,

Our hearts will lead as our bodies eagerly follow.

My gaze never breaks from yours as we reach the pinnacle,

Pulse quickens, sweat glistens, hushed screams echo."

Gave me chills!

Posted 12 Years Ago


That_Guy

12 Years Ago

Thank you I appreciate it. Awesome, I'm glad you liked it ;)
liked it lot , gave me the chills but in a good way :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Tatiana

12 Years Ago

hahaha well i am n i like sillyness , i also like when people make me smile ur doin good on both :)
That_Guy

12 Years Ago

Now that's what I like to hear
Tatiana

12 Years Ago

haha ur welcome :)
aww ! I love the line "our bodies entwined and minds connected" very AWSOME!

Posted 12 Years Ago


That_Guy

12 Years Ago

So do I. Thanks ;)
nakz....you're so good in romantic pieces huh...keep it up..:)thanks for sharing...;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


That_Guy

12 Years Ago

I'm glad you think so. will do ;) thank you
natzky

12 Years Ago

...based on experience i guess?hahah
That_Guy

12 Years Ago

possibly ;) haha

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Added on August 25, 2012
Last Updated on August 25, 2012
Tags: ecstasy, love, strength, sex, passion, heart, beauty, journey, safe

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That_Guy
That_Guy

Anza, CA



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First off I'm 23 years old. I'm a lover and a fighter. I've competed in various martial arts and I consider myself a rather opposing figure. On the outside you see tattoos, muscles and scars but what .. more..

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