True Ecstasy

Inspired by my Muse

You’ve never truly known strength,

Until the day I held you tight.

No safe haven as warm or shielding,

As when you’re wrapped securely in my arms.

Every detail, every inch of your fair skin,

Explored by my rough yet gentle hands.

Our bodies entwined and minds connected

New smells, new tastes, true ecstasy.

Our paths collide on a journey with the same destination,

Our hearts will lead as our bodies eagerly follow.

My gaze never breaks from yours as we reach the pinnacle,

Pulse quickens, sweat glistens, hushed screams echo.

I’ve never truly seen beauty,

Until the day I woke next to you.

Never so at peace or complete,

As when you’re wrapped securely in my arms.

Author's Note

Something a bit more mature but still my sappy self, hopeless romantic heh

Reviews

[Cole Hayley]

Our paths collide on a journey with the same destination,
Our hearts will lead as our bodies eagerly follow.
My gaze never breaks from yours as we reach the pinnacle,
Pulse quickens, sweat glistens, hushed screams echo.

Killer stanza man, great work

[That_Guy]

Thanks Cole, I really appreciate it man.

[Deandra Dawn]

I love it...Beautifully written and expressed. Amazing :)

[That_Guy]

I"m glad. Thank you Deandra ;)

[Deandra Dawn]

You are very welcome sir, much deserved :)

[That_Guy]

:)

[Boy of the red]

i loved it. it is the same with me and my love! i geuss the romantic guys get a good life sometimes :) anyway this is beautifully writeen with great imagery

[That_Guy]

Us Romantics usually deserve it. Thank you

[Tasha]

This is so nice and not sappy at all. I really enjoyed it, and it seems you're the reason for this little scene and for the record there are mature people on this site. You just have to look for them. Great piece though!!

[That_Guy]

Thank you for the review. Nothing wrong with Immaturity in doses. ;)

[Tasha]

You're welcome. Yeah but I think you've got enough doses of it for one day. ;)

[That_Guy]

haha for sure. Time to wind down my evening

[Tasha]

haha. Well have a good night

[That_Guy]

you as well, thanks again

[Tasha]

thanks, and you're welcome anytime :)

[Bare Trees]

Sorry, but I have to agree with Caradoc. I've been here over 5 years and there's nothing worse than kids coming on here to curse and act immature.

[That_Guy]

kids will be kids

[Tasha]

there are mature people on here

[Caradoc]

I was gonna read this but then I saw all of the comments below attacking some random person for a juvenile mistake. It turned me off to this piece and anyone associated with that unnecessary incident. If I were you, I would delete the entire line of posts, as it has nothing to do with this piece or writing at all.

I hope you have a wonderful day.

[That_Guy]

it kinda does suck that the comments below receive more attention than my poem but who am I to censor the masses.

Likewise

[Baby Ricochet]

Sweet poem. Nice rhythm. Romance isn't ricochets strong suit. I'm posting on a smart phone. Damn is it annoying.

[That_Guy]

finally decide to read the poem that sparked the animosity eh? haha.

I'ma big softy I can't help it haha. I know how you feel. Stupid Smart Phone!

[write4ever]

WOW that was HOT!!! do you have a girlfriend? if you do she is VERY lucky!!!!

[That_Guy]

I am currently single, crazy I know, but thank you ;)

[write4ever]

interested in getting to know me better?? maybe see if sparks will fly and a relationship can happen?

[That_Guy]

I'm certainly interested in getting to know you but I'm not really looking for a relationship right now

[write4ever]

oh i see! well we can get to know each other as friends

[That_Guy]

Looking forward to it

[write4ever]

i just wrote a poem about the trauma i went through after i was molested when i was 9. can you please check it out and write a review?

thanks

[That_Guy]

that's terrible... sure i can.

[Muse]

I’ve never truly seen beauty,
Until the day I woke next to you.
Never so at peace or complete,
As when you’re wrapped securely in my arms.

Awe..this read like an adult nursery rhyme. Nice work!

[That_Guy]

haha I suppose that would suite me perfectly ;)

Thanks ;)