Was It Worth it

Words hurt, but not as much as I do when you hurt me

Was it worth it?

You talked your s**t,

Barked out words meant to cut

Then walked off and slammed the door shut.

Big dog now, walking tall,

Expecting me to lay down or fall.

You must not know me or who I am,

Because now I’m coming and I don’t give a damn.

The door didn’t even slow me down,

You’ll choke on those words or maybe drown.

Before you know it I’m in your face,

Your bark is big but my bite shakes the place.

Unleashed, undone, unruly, and unafraid.

You have no clue what you have done,

Maybe your talk to you was fun,

But now you’ll have to answer for that fit,

So tell me man, was it worth it?

Author's Note

Sorry for the expletive, but it needed to be put in. I'm really a nice guy but don't mistake my kindness for weakness

Reviews

[Boy of the red]

amazing poem. i found the anger and as i read it i could see this happening to me so its very relatable and well written. loved it

[That_Guy]

Thank you, I wrote this with plenty of emotion behind it.

[Whitney Kleinhuizen]

Great poem! Very intense, you can feel the anger behind it. Well written.

[That_Guy]

definitely my most emotional all poem, too bad the emotion is anger.Thank you

[nigrum homonculus]

damn man. a badass piece. definitely got the message across that you was about to open six cans of whoop a*s. i liked this a lot. well done man.

[That_Guy]

Thanks bro.

[Destinyxi]

Really great poem, one of my favorites from you so well done! I like the anger in this, the strength, the power. It's as if I can feel each step you take as you're walking towards that door :P

[That_Guy]

I should quit trying to be all romantic and go back to being the Alpha Male me. My perception of poetry is warped lol

[That_Guy]

but thank you, I'm glad ;)

[Destinyxi]

Being all sweet and plain jane can definitely get dull. This is a new side of you. A side that's probably way more intriguing for your readers

[That_Guy]

outside of this site it's the more prominent me

[That_Girl]

Ouch! Feisty. I like it! Very well done!

[That_Guy]

I'm scary when I need to be

[Enid Blake]

Really good. The words all have that short, sharp edge to them and work well emphasising the anger. The poetry conveys the defensive content . Good job ;)

[That_Guy]

thank you, this one was pretty raw

[Tatiana]

i totally understand what you mean , and for me it wasn't worth it

[That_Guy]

Yeah I don't think it was with it to the person I wrote this about either

[Tatiana]

ehhhh thinkin bout him makes me mad

[That_Guy]

Have him piss me off, I'll handle it lol

[Tatiana]

hahaha i wish , told me he would never be mean to me he broke up with me and called me a stupid b***h and other names it was lovely

[That_Guy]

that sucks, sorry. sounds like you're better off

[Tatiana]

oh yeah way better

[Xx_Mizfit_xX]

No apologizes, it was a raw piece of emotion that I, for one enjoyed.

[That_Guy]

I appreciate it, thanks.

[Lily Mae]

It's all worth it if we get to kiss and make up after with all that spice lol..x

[That_Guy]

Not a bad way to look at things

[Lily Mae]

I have good ideas once in awhile...xo

[That_Guy]

i believe it

[Lily Mae]

:)

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice rhymes. Good job

[That_Guy]

Thanks Mate