The Smile

Just a short piece trying to capture an everyday moment.

I do not know her,

She does not know me,

We will never meet again,

But on that cold, grimy street,

She looked and smiled at me.

Reviews

[Surya]

It's romantic just a smile win's hearts..haha..:)

[Gee]

And I was left wondering what might have bee if only...
Really like this

[Jonathan]

Thank you :)

[Tina H.W.]

This is lovely. Short, sweet and oh so lovely. We've all experienced the connection with strangers at some point in our lives. It just makes you feel good the whole day through.
This is sweet and I love it :)

[Jonathan]

Thanks, the poem was meant to be short because that's what the moment is. It comes and before we know it it's over.

[Tina H.W.]

So true. Beautiful moments like those are over so quickly but the memory stays with us for so long afterwards.
Gorgeous poem :)

[B]

That smile
The gate way to simplicity
simple happiness
some are blind to that

Beautiful

[Jonathan]

Thank you :)

[Papaya]

i love these little 'human' moments when two people connect, if only for a moment.

sometimes just that small thing is a big lift to someone's spirit

[Jonathan]

Exactly what I was trying to get at. These moments are so precious.