SANITY

SANITY

A Poem by jonathanjaime
"

It's a mad world.

"

I am sitting in the corner of the room

Illuminated by the beam of the mysterious moon

smiling,no laughing, at me, the loon

losing my sanity so soon

 

Checking my watch, yes, it's midnight

Nothing new, nothing good, nothing right

just crippling, cold, shivering fright

of the hands that gave me this blight

 

I want to hide, I want to run

I want the sky with the hopeful sun

because I can't resist my deepest want

to shoot myself with this dark deadly gun

 

Woe to you who laugh at me

You are in a mad world but I am free

you do routine but can never be

the person who always see

 

Tell them I'm dead and gone in shame

to a place where you are crazy and I am sane

bringing me back will be in vain

because this is my life, not your game.

© 2013 jonathanjaime


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I find this piece eerie as it spoke to me of taking one's life. Perhaps because of the lines, "because I can't resist my deepest want to shoot myself with this dark deadly gun." What added more to the eeriness is that the voice made it to appear that what he/she shall do is actually a good thing. Well-written piece Kabayan.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jonathanjaime

11 Years Ago

I may be a little nyctophilic because my poems have similar tones as this one. Perhaps, most of us a.. read more
gabrielle

11 Years Ago

nyctophilic? what a word! have to google that. :)
jonathanjaime

11 Years Ago

hehe go google. hehe



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I find this piece eerie as it spoke to me of taking one's life. Perhaps because of the lines, "because I can't resist my deepest want to shoot myself with this dark deadly gun." What added more to the eeriness is that the voice made it to appear that what he/she shall do is actually a good thing. Well-written piece Kabayan.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jonathanjaime

11 Years Ago

I may be a little nyctophilic because my poems have similar tones as this one. Perhaps, most of us a.. read more
gabrielle

11 Years Ago

nyctophilic? what a word! have to google that. :)
jonathanjaime

11 Years Ago

hehe go google. hehe
Wow! great work here, stunning imagery in the 1st 4 lines and engaging story progression of the rest of the piece. The last line magnified as the heart of the poem. thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loveitloveitloveitloveit!
It is our life...not their game. Yes!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jonathanjaime

11 Years Ago

was inspired by the Joker in the Dark Knight hehe
Dhaye

11 Years Ago

It's really nice...Yes, it's a mad world. Though the Joker is the mad man (antagonist) in the movie,.. read more

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Added on April 13, 2013
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Tags: sanity, mad, crazy

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jonathanjaime
jonathanjaime

Legazpi City, 5, Philippines



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I am biology professor at a local university. Although my inclination to science is huge, I still find literature to be one of my undying passion. I find reading stories, poems and essays entertaining.. more..

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