Breathtaking

Breathtaking

A Poem by Jolie Blossom
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I wrote this haiku about how gorgeous mornings are at the ocean. I think it's like the ocean completes with the sky over which is more beautiful, but it all is. Hope you enjoy. :)

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Seashells like porcelain
Glimmer through transient tides
Capturing dawns breath






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© 2012 Jolie Blossom


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So peaceful read and love the snap

Posted 10 Years Ago


It's amazing how you can paint a picture with words! Keep doing what you do! Nice Job

Posted 11 Years Ago


I agree. Beautiful photo and description in the poem. Very good use of words to give reflection to the photo. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


what an absolutely beautiful poem. the title is perfect!

Posted 11 Years Ago


A beautiful poem to go with a breathtaking photo! =) I so can relate to this. Thank you for sharing!

Kate

Posted 11 Years Ago


What a beautiful Haiku! This form has always amazed me, partly because I am absolutely awlful at it and you are not.

Posted 12 Years Ago


What 's a haiku??

Posted 12 Years Ago


Stunning photos, and goes so well with your haiku! I feel refreshed from being here! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the way the sunlight seems to dance along the tops of the shells

Posted 12 Years Ago


Jolie Blossom

12 Years Ago

Gorgeous huh? Wish I could live there... :)
really good atmospheric

Posted 12 Years Ago


Jolie Blossom

12 Years Ago

Thanks :)

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Added on September 8, 2012
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Tags: dawn, ocean, shimmering, sand, seashells, tides, breath, beautiful, haiku

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Jolie Blossom
Jolie Blossom

Latham, NY



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Heyyy Shakespeares!! I'm Jolie, 24, and a free spirit. Welcome to my little corner on the cafe. :D I mostly write poetry, but I've dabbled at stories and I do write my own lyrics for guitar. And.. more..

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