Brokenhearted fable

Just something short I wrote a long time ago.

Reach for the fable containing my heart,

It's cut up and torn like an old piece of art.

From times when you rented it long ago,

It collapsed in the center, burning a hole.

Now it's incomplete as it's broken from you,

And so I'll start over with a heart that is new.

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

Nice. I like the attitude of the poet: she doesn't just give up. That girl has heart

[kublakhan27]

I love the fable analogy at the beginning...everything else falls perfectly into place from there :)

[The Nude Writer]

Yay! You started strong and stayed strong. This is a downright professional poem. You totally rock the poetry world.

[Jolie Blossom]

Aww, thanks girl!! I love writing so much, it's like second nature to me... :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

lovely little write. Easy to read as flow and meter are good. Has good authority. Emotion in buckets!

[Jolie Blossom]

John, thank you! I wrote this probably when I was 17 or so... but I still like it. :)