Deteriorating Friendships

This poem is about a narcissistic girl who uses and abuses her friend. Just when her friend gains the courage to walk away, she ends up getting sucked back in.

Deteriorating friendships,

So long ago they seem.

Breaking from a simple lie,

Tearing at the seam.

Waking every single day,

Just to revisit the past.

Proving once again,

Of why it didn't last.

Crawling back to you again,

You just want to hurt her soul.

When her heart was broken,

You finally received your goal.

So close, to you it seems,

A friendship just within grasp.

Becoming an old memory,

To make her collapse and relapse.

Overcoming the pain inside,

To accept it back in her life.

But why do you want to continue

To stab someone in the back with a knife?

Friendships deteriorating,

Transpiring right before your eyes.

But your narcissistic ways must die

If she must live with compromise.

Reviews

[zainul]

Hi Jolie,your poem gives me a new lesson on Narcissistic personality disorder (NPD).
Congratulations for an innovative write.
I could learn a lot from the following link,which may also be of interest to some readers.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Narcissistic_personality_disorder

[Stanley Wilson]

good write reminds me of school

[Harley (arbiter)]

That was a good write. A sad story bet well conveyed in it. Great job

[Sirius King]

nice

[Jolie Blossom]

Thanks Serenus! :) I have some time now to upload a lot of my poems... so sorry if I invade your news feed! Lol

[Sirius King]

no problem lol ill probably be doing the same pretty soon :-)

[Jolie Blossom]

awesome! i love your stuff, u got talent boy!!