Ocean of love

A poem I wrote about how falling in love takes you to places you have never been before, and how overwhelmingly beautiful it can be.

Dipping my feet into the sparkling salt water

Your currents swiftly carry me gently 

I begin to float endlessly away from shore

The world around fades to a pale blue

A sequence of waves colored in oceanic blue 

Crash softly against my blushing cheek

Majestically washing my worries away

I sink; drunk on your wondrous tranquility 

Bubbles rise from my inflated chest

Sinking into a bottomless abyss

Ajar are my eyes to this marvelous sight

Capture my heart, love, grant me our first kiss

Reviews

[spiritwind]

the imagery of drowning in an ocean of love and its softly crashing waves is very well-done

[Steven Cash]

Yes, beautiful as the others have said. It has a certain feel to it. Kind of a... free-flowing feel, almost the same feeling you get when you are in love in the first place.

:) you are good at this!

[Soul Fire]

Beautiful,Beautifully written.Flows so gracefully! Excellent work!

[Priscilla Sayers]

I love the serenity of this piece! Thank you for sharing it. I love the ocean, it does wonders for the soul.

[Jolie Blossom]

Thanks Priscilla!! I loved writing it, and thinking about the peace of being surrounded by the ocean. :):)

[Priscilla Sayers]

It is where my peace of mind resides:)