Everlasting

just a free verse that i did just spur of the moment

 

Memories from childhood

splashing in puddles

beneath the ancient cypress tree

using the Spainsh moss as a wig

you were the king

and i your queen

we would laugh until our sides ached

we would sword fight with a twig

and swim in the bayou

we would always think of something new

growing older in high school

it was always me and you

you were the king

and i your queen

when they crowned us at prom

they played our song

and i wished that dance would last forever

growing older now in college

you are the groom

and i your bride

we danced and laughed into the night

and i know our dnace will last

as i look into your eyes

so filled with love

I know we have so many memories still to make

Author's Note

constructive criticism would be much appreciated :)
and im new at this, so be nice please :]

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omg stephie, i love your peotry...
did you let mrs neuner read some... they do that book this that ang is so obsessed about (poor mrs. neuner) lol