Trapped

a villanelle poem for my creative writing class

Why does the rain insist to fall

to hinder me useless

i have lost it all

forever a down pour, the rain has come to call

the raindrops upon my cheek, a gentle carress

why does the rain insist to fall

and here i am, without a parasol

my mind has begun to dull from this water, so poisoness

i have lost it all

it has become dark as i sit up against this wall

so scared, it all seems pointless

why does the rain insist to fall

i feel like a brocken porcelain doll

my world has become a mess

i have lost it all

the light refuses to shine in this dark hall

the skies so dark, i see no brightness

why does the rain insist to fall

i have lost it all

Author's Note

constructive criticism would be much appreciated