Make a Wish

free verse something that was just spur of the moment i had fun with it :)

Make a wish

and blow out the candles

try and make it the first time

laughter and nerves

you miss it by only one

they say your wish won't come true

you wish it anyways

hopeing they'll make an exception

theres only one wish you have

he's standing across the table from you

you catch each others eyes

a smile creeps across your face

he smiles back

you blow out the last candle

 

Author's Note

constructive criticism would be much appreciated

Reviews

[He@ther!]

L.O.V.E.!!!!:) This one is so creative!!!:)