Red

another color-metaphor poem for my creative writing class

Red is the gem of the New Year

sweet candy apples of the fall

crimson life being spilt

dangerous yet beautiful roses

the dirt roads of the south

 

It's curling up with a book

and heat of anger

and the passion of love

never ending, never regretting

It's warmth and comfort

 

Red is

Tabasco Sauce and crawfish

the blush upon my cheeks while he looks my way

the burning wish that he would stay

a fluttering heart

Author's Note

any constructive criticism would be much appreciated =]
but im new at this, so be nice ;]

Reviews

[He@ther!]

I love it!!!:) lol I didn't know you had revised this!!:) Its really really good:)

love,
Heather

P.S.: What did I miss today in class?

[Suzanne Deakins]

Well I think this is nice.. sweet... a mixture of imagery that works well ..keep at it.!!! Suzanne