Half a Cup of Pain, Sprinkle Some Crazy

title says it all. rawr. real life experience. sucks a*s. :P

Unconditional love feels like an understatement here

Love, love i know is what i feel, but also what i fear

Addiction, addiction... deathly addicted to you

Answers, answers is what i need from you, fool

Your eyes, eyes... beautifully, miraculously sapphire

Your scent, so delicious, getting higher and higher

I already know the answer, even if you act sweet and kind

But i can't help it, you're driving me crazy... taking over my feeble mind

Her stare, her death glare, chaining me down

So stupid, so ignorant, so foolish... i feel like a clown

Tearing away my dignity, self esteem... my self pride...

Choking death painfully would arise if caught by your side

Your careless stare digging into my skin

My thick metal armor now turning into tin

This feeling is not mutual between you and I

It's sad to think that without this artificial love, i'd probably collapse and die

Answers, answers... that's all i really want

With the demon in my face, laughing as she taunts

I beg myself for this just to be a nasty dream, and soon i'll wake

But i know i must fathom cruel reality, and realize that this is all just fake

Author's Note

I'm sorry for not uploading any poems in a while. D: i've been really busy.:/ i'll try to upload them more frequently i promise!:)

Reviews

[Adam :P]

i like this. good poem.

[Ivy]

I really like your poem. The emotions are clear, and I can see a conversation in my head. I like the style, and the flow. It was great.

[Andrew Wright]

Have you somehow gazed into my life? This is such a beautiful poem, even through the pain. Or rather, it's beauty is augmented by it. A gentle caress to a broken consciousness. And I thank you for that.

[Shawn Killian]

"Love, love i know is what i feel, but also what i fear
Addicton, Addiction... deathly addicted to you''
OI am in love with this. Its pure magic from beginning to end. Number four of my favorites.

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. When I was surrounded by love. It was worth the possibility of sadness. No safe risk in this world. I like how made the statements about the decision of love.
"Love, love i know is what i feel, but also what i fear
Addiction, addiction... deathly addicted to you"
When we are deep entrenched in the emotion of love. Leave us open for heartache and the possibility of great pleasure. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Linear]

Ah what is love but an aching heart, and a pocketfull of broken promises.

And yet i loved this beautiful worded and well executed poem.

keep on doing what your doing

[Dream Weaver]

Not everything or every dream has a fairy taled ending.
So very descriptive in your writing, I could visualize it
so easily. Great job...

[SimplyDisastrous]

This is a really amazing poem you got here. The rhyme scheme was great and your word choices were, too. I think my favorite lines were:

"Your eyes, eyes... beautifully, miraculously sapphire
Your scent, so delicious, getting higher and higher".

Excellent job.

[De'Andre]

This is beautiful and speaks the sad, cold truth of having to deal with reality. I Truly enjoyed reading this poem. You have an amazing talent. Excellent rhyming scheme, excellent poem. Great write!