Beyond This World

a world i saw in a dream...

She danced across the ocean water

the sun following behind

laughing with our sons and daughters

looking for more balloons to find

Giggling, laughing, soaring through the sky

a land of color coated sweets below

a land in which elephants could fly

and where you could shrink or grow

Aging a hundred years a second

but still staying the same

diving into the ocean, as they beckoned 

playing the little fishies game

Where anything can happen, and anything will

flying, dying, and coming back alive

endless fun, endless everything, until

when it all disappears, and your back in your hive

As you jump from your marshmallow sheets

don't you fret, my child

In this land, whom did you meet?

And like a 5 year old, we're twirling away, wild

Author's Note

HAHAHA it's sorta lame .-.

Reviews

[luciddreamer]

Not many things give me that "good" feelings....this did

[Aven]

Haha, this brought me back to the original Peter Pan, fresh ideas that force us to consider flying elephants and what not. I loved it. Its absolutely brilliant, and it is the kind of world I see myself living in 5 years from now. ;)

Thanks!

[Carolina Kel]

It's not lame, it's very upbeat and has a almost Alice in Wonderland feel. :)

[vincentbals]

I like it! Good work.

[Yours Truly]

I like it!! It tempts the reader to join you in your world. :)

[Quaddeth]

Very relatable poem, universally appealing to everyone. The strict rhyme scheme encourages one to read in a nursery rhyme fashion, which fuels and underlined innocense. A unique wonder, thanks for the read.

[Amelia Harris]

No, not lame my friend! This was enjoyable piece, whimsical and touching.
Nice poem, keep it up!

[sammyj]

nice very nice

[gimpy]

wow this is rely great I love the happyness as you view the world in the form of any child woulddream of

[John Stussy]

Lame? I beg to differ, beautiful fits much better than lame. :) Your imagery and whimsical quality in this poem was superb, making for a light-hearted read. I greatly enjoyed this.