Beyond This World

a world i saw in a dream...

She danced across the ocean water

the sun following behind

laughing with our sons and daughters

looking for more balloons to find

Giggling, laughing, soaring through the sky

a land of color coated sweets below

a land in which elephants could fly

and where you could shrink or grow

Aging a hundred years a second

but still staying the same

diving into the ocean, as they beckoned 

playing the little fishies game

Where anything can happen, and anything will

flying, dying, and coming back alive

endless fun, endless everything, until

when it all disappears, and your back in your hive

As you jump from your marshmallow sheets

don't you fret, my child

In this land, whom did you meet?

And like a 5 year old, we're twirling away, wild

Author's Note

HAHAHA it's sorta lame .-.

Reviews

[PurpleQuartz]

Amazing write!! I love it!

[Denise]

Cute, fun, and wymsical. A must read.

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WoW-this is so full of expressionism and imigism,
just gloriously beautiful !!! u r o talented !!!

[Mauricio Montoya]

This piece is so Lucy in the sky with diamonds.
Great job well done.

[Mattox]

HAHAHA reading this made me happy! this is awesome -Mattox

[Courtland Sky]

AMAZINGG! it was different, but i like different. -courtland.

[Jordyn Lee]

The meaning? hmm... the meaning behind this poem is: even when times are at its worst, there's always that special place we can just disappear too. It seems like everyone is creating their own little fantasy worlds, and as have i. i just wanted to share a glimpse of mine with you all:]

[Angel Veselinov]

Nice poem good flow and rhyming :) gotta question the meaning thou :) nevertheless great work thanks for sharing :)

[Jim Lozkittle]

Very upbeat, cute, very cute lol. couldn't help but chuckle at the marsmallow sheets because of the fact that they sound very comfy lol. Despite it being so random it runs together very well

[Brittany W]

this was a cute poem, it makes you wonder how things really would be in your own little world, i enjoyed this, it was simple and well written, good write.