This Poem is A Lot More Than You Think

(: not all my poems r depressing -.-

I love your sweet smile, i love your emerald eyes

I love your care-free personality that no one can despise 

I love your warm auburn hair that glistens in the sun

I love the way you talk, laugh, smile, walk and run

I love the way you make me smile, just by saying 'hi"

I love the way I get teary-eyed when we say 'goodbye'

I love how the slightest things you say can make me laugh so hard

I love how when your around, i can act like a total retard

I love how smart you are; so witty and quite clever

I love how I could write about you on and on forever

I love it, how hard i fell, and am still falling, too

I love how i can end the poem with 3 words: "I LOVE YOU" <3

Reviews

[piggy]

aww, now ain't that the dangest cutest thing i ever did read.

wees alls luve you tooo sweety pie snif sniff

[Ashley June Canfield]

this is adorable

[Cynthia]

Great Job!
It seems the character inside the poem is a sweet couple!!!!!
Love it!

[Jane Doe]

i like it alot but technically 3 words n two symbols:)
jk
but yea it was wonderful
i like n luv it
luv it
luv ya
-sugar dumpling muffin baby pumpkin pie:)

[sammyj]

good job

[Stephen_Fatewright]

Get ton blud! Grt, ane it?! Is like, no messin. Jus spill it like u is true and dat. Blud, if I's gets a gurl oo is like dat, I b like, boom ane it? I's single now, but is like, shutup ane it?! I's like not bein like dat! But yea, ane it blud?

[Aynsley]

You are a really talented writer! Hi, my names Aynsley; and I am thirteen years old. I'm new to Writerscafe, but I've already published four chapters to my novel Born To Die; I hope you like it, please check it out. Here's a Rating of 70 for your effort. Add me as a friend :)

[Jordyn Lee]

-.- I was tired wen writing it. gimmie a break D:

[Koala]

*cough* Oh man. "I love how I could write about you on and on until forever"? I expect more writing about your love for him :D