Edge Of Reality

the story of the song is in the song

Edge Of Reality

I walk along a thin line darling
Dark shadows follow me
Here's where life's dream lies disillusioned
The edge of reality

Oh I can hear strange voices echo
Laughing with mockery
The border line of doom I'm facing
The edge of reality

On the edge of reality she sits there tormenting me
The girl with the nameless face
On the edge of reality where she overpowers me
With fears that I can't explain
She drove me to the point of madness
The brink of misery
If she's not real then I'm condemned to
The edge of reality

On the edge of reality she sits there tormenting me
The girl with the nameless face
On the edge of reality where she overpowers me
With fears that I can't explain
She drove me to the point of madness
The brink of misery
If she's not real then I'm condemned to
The edge of reality

Reviews

[Lucky Me]

I like this much better than your other. I pictured a pretty girl, a manipulative girl, sitting on the edge of some shelf or cliff looking down and laughing at your struggle to understand. Very nice.

[Shadow of Sunshine]

that's plain amazing...

[Voice11]

great work I like the words that create the illusion of this girl you speak of. great work!

[CLUTZ]

nice.....sounds like a dream, or rather a hallucination i used to have when I was half sleep. but tht's not important. This is really good.

[Kenya J]

Great poem.... well written! Well done!

[Vampire]

I thopught this poem was really cool, i used to write poems like this but not much anymore :D Anyways........really great poem :D

[Meredith Leigh]

Edgey! =]
But seriously, it was really cool, really dark. It flowed well and painted a very vivid picture for the reader. Great work!

- Kriss