Don't feel my sorrow

My name is johnny it's been three years since I written anything so please be patient with my writing if it needs improvement please give me advice. Thank you.

Let the gloominess of these clouds that hover over me alone
For they shield me from the shine of her light
The way it shines over the grass that covers her so will
The way the flowers grow around her so beautiful
Don't feel my sorrow
Just see me as she had before Heavenly Father needed her home

Don't feel his sorrow
Let the rifle around his shoulder comfort him
Let the battle rushing through his heart guide him
My brother needs no petty only the sound of rounds
The rounds that chase us, the rounds that hover over us
We'll be his light under his dark clouds that follow him

I'm still here, do you not see a piece of her in me
Aren't I a piece of you
Please look down at me and know she has not left you alone
Can you feel my sorrow,can you feel the pain that runs throw me as will
Please don't leave the boy who loves his father
Feel my sorrow