Are We Okay

This Dial tone makes my ears ring. Her voice makes my heart sing. But will i ever hear it again? is this really going to be the end? Has she said goodbye for the last time? Im left alone and begin to cry. Phone By my side and im awaiting a ring. To hear her say i love you is the only thing, that got me through the day, Am i okay? Are we okay? what is there left to say?

 

My heart, my love you stole them when you walked out the door. look through your bags i want them back, their not for you any more. you are thousands of miles away and the only thing left for me to say, will we be okay.

Reviews

[Devon]

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[Musings]

Hi Jordan,

Wonderful poem, I really enjoyed it. Maybe just clean up the grammer a bit, and perhaps a different layout, and I think it's a terrific poem.

Thanks for sharing