A review of sorts

A review of sorts

A Poem by Ashes of Apathy
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I just made this up on the fly as a review of the Lady Sphinx peom: Middle Class Lady Breathes the Blues

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The following review was inspired the notorious Ms. Lady Sphinx,

 

As I logged in today

To see what awaits my eyes

And awakes my sense of self,

To my surprise,

There in the midst of my fingertip grasp,

Lye’s, the request

To explore,

And conjure

My opinion of a piece,

Of anger and peace,

That meshes at a pace,

That place men on their knees.

Interwoven alliterations,

Entice my satisfaction,

In my consideration,

A female voice,

That speaks the strength of a nation,

And spills an oozing passion,

Who leaves no stone unturned,

Is among us,

To divide and conquer

The gaping faction,

Between frivolous fact

And fortuitous fiction.

-jr

 

© 2008 Ashes of Apathy


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Ashes of Apathy
I just made this up on the fly as a review of the Lady Sphinx peom: Middle Class Lady Breathes the Blues

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Lady Sphinx is quite powerful aint she, nice for on the fly.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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I am a poet, a storyteller, a musician, a teacher, a student, a father and a son. I plan to change the world one word at a time. -jr more..

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