Teenage W***e

Hey there you teenage w***e

Why you sittin' there lookin' so bored

Did you think he would love you more

Much more then the others before

 

Its okay you don't have to worry

Your dad's out of town and your mom is out shopping

Go to your room

Text your thoughts

 

Too bad you're a teenage w***e

And no one wants to listen

People think your stupid and hungry for more

Thats not it, I can tell Teenage W***e

 

Take off the big sunglasses

Clear your makeup

Mess up your bleach blonde hair

Get those curls, you'll be able to hide it in your curls

 

Lay on your bed and close your eyes

Start thinking of getting out of this rut

I promise if you just try

You'll find you have a change of luck

 

So thats why I asked

Why are you sittin' there so bored

Did you think he would love you

Much  more than the others before

 

 

Author's Note

ignore grammar, comment/rate

Reviews

[TamiViolet]

Quite the interesting piece although I believe that teenage girls act this way for a reason... Perhaps they want to be loved but lack the proper skills to go about it with class, or perhaps they are insecure about their appearance....etc. It's so sad really becaue they don't understand the importance of self-respect.

I understand the message behind this one... Self love comes from within, but day to day experiences are no stranger to the cause. I feel for the lovely young girl who is really crying out for help... There exists so much pressure on young girls these days...

Although I always wondered why no one ever writes about teenage boys who are 'easy'... just a thought...

'Lay on your bed and close your eyes
Start thinking of getting out of this rut
I promise if you just try
You'll have a change of luck'...

The above stanza offers hope and suggests compassion...

[The Wave]

nice write,

the beginning draws you in to read more and you dont want to stop reading till the very end. nice...

overall, its written very well, loved the details and image of the "teenage w***e"---you gave us a face for this piece. there was a good flow and i enjoyed reading this
good job

[Dittobug]

I liked this, it was a bittersweet slice of life for me. Many of my friends behave like this, and although they are hurting, they kind of brought it on themselves due to their past behavior. They wonder why those guys dump them after finally having sex with them and it is because that's all they see in them because that's how the girl acts.

This poem makes me feel a bit sad because my generation is really screwed up. Thanks for sharing, it is easily one of my favorite writes.

[cest la vie]

Raw, brutal and such a fact for so many..
very well written..

[BlackCandle]

I like this piece because is shows me a slice of life I'm unfamiliar with. When it comes to reading thats always what I want, show me something new... Don't bash me with your opinions don't harass me with your grammar and punctuation, don't try to convert me or persuade me to join your cause or crusade. Just let me in for a moment, let me see what you see.

You did this.

Thanks

JS