Lithium Carbonate

Lithium Carbonate

A Poem by Johnny Monroe

In the morning you take me to places I like

Just so I can be a new person that very same night

Please don't say my name

I'm not in the mood today

 

Can you stop this please

No pressure anymore

Its not that i don't care

I just feel too bored

 

I'm so happy today

Becasue you're by my side

Lets not end this right now

We can find a place to hide

 

I'm so sad today

Thats okay

Feelin' way to pathetic

Don't worry, I'm the one who said it

 

I'd take that smile away

Buts thats okay

Cause today I'm alright

I love you so much today

 

 And you know i will 'till the day I die

 

 

© 2009 Johnny Monroe


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Johnny Monroe
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I love the conflicting emotions in this. Like in one stanza you'll say, "Can you stop this please", then in the next stanza you'll say, "I'm so happy today." I like that a lot, it reminds me of some of the work of Kurt Cobain, if you don't mind the comparison. Great job! :)

--Alisa_the_fluff_ball


Posted 14 Years Ago


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I thought that this was a very interesting write, it told a story, but at the same time, didn't. That doesn't make sense... Regardless, this was a fun read. Keep it comin'. xD

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Johnny Monroe
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I am Johnny Monroe, I'm a teenager and I write what I feel. Add me as a friend if you like or whatever, I'm a little too lazy to finish this, but ill try my best. I like writing about human emotions.. more..

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