What would you do about the bodies in my bed?

What would you do about the bodies in my bed?

A Poem by Johnny Monroe

 

What would you do if you knew about me and her

How did you'd think I'd react when I saw him

Can't we smoke? NO because you gave it up

And I'm standing here ALONE

 

Why are you so vulnerabe

Don't you know it makes me crazy

Now you're waiting

I feel like a hunter without a kill, but only your tracks in my eyes

Why do i still defend you? Can't you see or am I the only one who knows?

 

Give me my gun and I'll make amends

Now he's in my head again, starring at me with his poison smile

I'm a hungover user with a napalm heart heavy with revenge

You call me a hypocrite, but I'm feeling way too violent

You'll never find out about her and it breaks my heart

 

What would you do about him and her in my bead

How did you think I'd react when I saw him

Call me bipolar

Threaten me with your breath

Touch me

 

But please don't tell me you love me because its so untrue

And you know the world will probably forgive you

 

© 2009 Johnny Monroe


Author's Note

Johnny Monroe
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Excellent title and the write doesn't disappoint. Lord have mercy, I know people like the woman you're talking about... no wonder your poem is full of such strong emotion. Still get just a hint of conflict to go with the anger. Definitely a lot of "power" and energy emitted from this.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Deep, sooo deep, I really like this piece, its so meaningful, yet so sad, I can almost feel the emotion. Some of the lines made my head spin though. I have to say what caught my eye was the title! All in all good write.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on October 28, 2009
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Johnny Monroe
Johnny Monroe

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I am Johnny Monroe, I'm a teenager and I write what I feel. Add me as a friend if you like or whatever, I'm a little too lazy to finish this, but ill try my best. I like writing about human emotions.. more..

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