lines to something greater

new lines to something i am writing... not in order... just out there... feedback as usual is greatly wanted.

How much thinking goes into the thought of me offering you a penny... for your thoughts that is.

I'm thinking about the thoughts I'm having of thinking outside the box.

I care nothing of the fine thread count of your bed sheets, I wish to find and define the fibers of which your mind speaks.

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

some good stuff here, it is plain that this is unfinished but the references to fibres and the very 1st line show promise...not too sure about the 2nd line though...keep working on it